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How to Write an Effective Introduction for TOEFL and IELTS Essays

Manami

In the previous article, we discussed how to outline your essay effectively. When writing an academic essay, it is essential to structure it properly, consisting of an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. After completing your outline, the next step is to write the introduction.


But what should be included in the introduction of an essay for IELTS and TOEFL?


TOEFL Introduction

The length of the introduction may vary depending on the essay, but in general, a well-structured introduction should include four key elements:


  1. Introducing the Topic

  2. Providing Background Information

  3. Presenting the Problem

  4. Explaining the Purpose of the Essay


Let’s take a closer look at each of these elements.


1. Introducing the Topic

The first step in writing an introduction is to introduce the topic to the reader. The topic should be clearly stated so that the reader understands the subject of the essay. Here is an example:

"In recent decades, the impact of human activities on the environment has become a topic of increasing concern."

In this example, the sentence introduces the topic of how human activities affect the environment.


2. Providing Background Information

After introducing the topic, it is important to provide background information to help the reader better understand the issue. This can include historical context, definitions of key terms, or relevant research and data. For example:


"Historical data and current trends indicate that industrialization, deforestation, and urbanization have contributed significantly to environmental degradation."

Providing such data and trends enhances the credibility of your argument and engages the reader.


3. Presenting the Problem

Defining the problem is crucial because it explains why the topic is important. This section highlights the key issues related to the topic and sets the stage for further discussion. For instance:


"To explore this assertion, it is essential to consider various aspects such as pollution, climate change, and the depletion of natural resources."

Here, the sentence lists specific environmental issues that will be addressed in the essay.



4. Explaining the Purpose of the Essay

The final part of the introduction should clearly state the purpose of the essay. This statement outlines what the essay aims to achieve and provides a roadmap for the reader. An example of this would be:


"This essay aims to examine the extent to which human activities have affected the quality of life on Earth by analyzing both the detrimental impacts and the efforts being made to mitigate these effects."

This sentence informs the reader about the scope and focus of the essay.


Conclusion


The introduction is one of the most critical parts of an essay, as it is the first thing the reader encounters. Its purpose is to grab the reader’s attention, explain the significance of the topic, and provide a preview of the main arguments. A well-written introduction sets the stage for a strong essay, helping readers understand its structure and purpose from the beginning.


By mastering these four key elements—introducing the topic, providing background information, defining the problem, and explaining the essay’s purpose—you can craft compelling introductions for your TOEFL and IELTS essays. Good luck with your writing!


Author: Manami Palmini


  • Teaching Experience

    • Studied theater and scriptwriting while taking intensive English courses at the Graduate School of International Christian University.
    • Three years of experience as an English instructor at a private tutoring school in Japan.
    • Earned a Master’s degree in Arts Education from New York University (NYU), researching the effects of artistic activities on language learning.
    • Certified in TESOL (Teaching English to Speakers of Other Languages).

Past Support Experience

  • Daily English conversation support for children attending local and Japanese schools.
  • Preparation for Eiken, junior high school, high school, and university entrance exams.
  • Business English for expatriates.
  • Small talk and school-related communication support for parents with children.
  • Presentation coaching for researchers who have relocated to the U.S.

 
 
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